nice and I agree so much more could be done with this... damn time restraints. but hey that was good either way.
nice and I agree so much more could be done with this... damn time restraints. but hey that was good either way.
Nope this isn't to late (as far as i'm concerned) because its better than the last few I reviewed, Very well done, your art style is good, animation was flawless, and sound was good. Im given you 10/10 hopefully it helps
Interesting, some artwork could improve.
Thank you for the feedback!
I actually made the characters rough on purpose to finish it quicker, because I only had 3 days to create the whole thing for the jam. I'm glad you liked anyway.
wow the elephant was trying to hide the bodies? and people call elephants stupid. Everything works, it would of been 5 stars but the dramatic reenactment looked rushed, and sloppy like you stopped trying.
Im still shocked an elephant knew to hide the body, not sure why wasn't like it would have been arrested but maybe the elephant wanted to keep its savana clean. Also the reason that part happened was time was running out and i wanted to make sure it got out on time without any trouble( already had problems when it first uploaded). I wish I had more time to actually tweak that to look better but when time is crunched you work with what you got.
Comment: could have gone without the defecation. Review: Short, lacks description a.k.a the story behind the death. sound works, animation works, and the art isn't bad.
everything worked fine and the moral should be don't shoot cacti.
This video need a little work, first it needs color. Next you didn't show what happened you implied what happened but I couldn't tell that he died. was that supposed to be blood at the end? and the cops reaction kinda sucked, I would expect shock not disgust.
I was trying to keep it funny in the end. I didn't really know how to end it haha. Every other part that looks like it needed work was because of the limited timeframe. It sucked. But thanks for the review!
Comment: You should never rush just to get something out, users would rather see good quality. Quality over quantity my friend. Review: it's informative, the animation is good, the art is good, but it needs sound.
Yeah I know I shouldn't have rushed but I did want to submit something to the movie jam haha. My next work should show some promise. I was going to add in sound but I ran out of time to submit this :/. Thanks for the comment and review!
Informative and funny. Everything's great.
kinda funny
well
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