Better than most on here, I feel sadness at Yoshi dieing though.
Better than most on here, I feel sadness at Yoshi dieing though.
Needs a plot, a storyline, and audio
(other than the ocean)
There actually is a story. It's supposed to portray a history class. The students (Peeps in blue) get distracted (The clock-which is a thing students commonly look at- sucks them in) but the teacher (Man in black) does something (He grabs some kind of device) to awaken sedulity (The green robot) in order to burn up the slackness (the blue stuff the clock emits)
Also the sound you're hearing is not an ocean but just regular wind.
your sound cuts out half way in when you zoom in on the blue guy. more story line, and the audio was to muffled at the end when the character was crammed into the mail box.
That was funny. Everything worked.
wow um your animation worked, you sart work needs improvement, the sound was ok.
Sound is going to be improving in the episodes to come and the artwork is meant to be childish and weird like it is. Thank you for your honest review!
Very well done.
this is the second one of gary I've seen but this is so much better
Review: good animation, good music, ok art.
Improvements: make it longer, give it more of a plot and storyline. instead of "cereal goes wrong" you should use something like "cereal gets hungry too" or " when cereal box prizes attack" feel free to use either.
thanks man appreciate it : )
yes i kinda just wrote anything that came to mind i didnt really think about it
my future videos would be a bit longer w more of a story bc this was just random which is what i was aiming for
it wasn't bad for flipbook style animation but could use a lot of work
hmmmm ,ok will try next time .i would love to see you animate something
Comment: wait so he died by a cow falling through the ceiling and squishing him in his sleep then they both die? I'm so lost... who was farting and/or pooping? what was his story? Review: art was good, sound was fine, animation was fine. just wish there was more description
The guy was farting in his sleep. The cow squirted all of it's milk out, and eventually died from not being able to get up. The death I chose was a cow crashed through a man's ceiling, and crushed him in his sleep. That's pretty much it. ( I updated the description)
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