that was good but it would of been better with voice actors, the whole robot thing sounds like script reading with no emotion... no personality, but good echo effect cause I almost couldn't tell.
that was good but it would of been better with voice actors, the whole robot thing sounds like script reading with no emotion... no personality, but good echo effect cause I almost couldn't tell.
The screaming gets real annoying and ruins the good tune, get better pictures for your flash, would of been funnier if you speed up captain floppers the benny hill theme (which I don't know the actual name of) is always done with fast movement because slow movement just doesn't fit the song. Plus I don't understand what your trying to show us hother than he does business randomly screaming at people
The only thing I can comment on is the cat wearing glasses. Artwork for the cat is fine, the glasses just doesn't fit right for one and two maybe have the cat swallow the fish instead of drop it. Everything else is fine.
This is awesome, your style is pretty cool. The only artwork that needs improvement is the castle and sidewalk in the end. I would love to help but im just a writer, a good one, but just a writer. if you need one of those let me know.
thank you for the offer. as busy as I have been could use the help. send me a message and ill send you to our fourm if interested in seeing where we are
your arts ok, the animations good, and the soundtrack works, but needs more of a storyline.
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