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[Monsterclock]

Needs a plot, a storyline, and audio
(other than the ocean)

Simius responds:

There actually is a story. It's supposed to portray a history class. The students (Peeps in blue) get distracted (The clock-which is a thing students commonly look at- sucks them in) but the teacher (Man in black) does something (He grabs some kind of device) to awaken sedulity (The green robot) in order to burn up the slackness (the blue stuff the clock emits)
Also the sound you're hearing is not an ocean but just regular wind.

[Kazoo Krew EP1]

wow um your animation worked, you sart work needs improvement, the sound was ok.

OfficialKazooKrew responds:

Sound is going to be improving in the episodes to come and the artwork is meant to be childish and weird like it is. Thank you for your honest review!

[cereal]

Review: good animation, good music, ok art.
Improvements: make it longer, give it more of a plot and storyline. instead of "cereal goes wrong" you should use something like "cereal gets hungry too" or " when cereal box prizes attack" feel free to use either.

AndersAnimated responds:

thanks man appreciate it : )
yes i kinda just wrote anything that came to mind i didnt really think about it

my future videos would be a bit longer w more of a story bc this was just random which is what i was aiming for

[plane crash]

it wasn't bad for flipbook style animation but could use a lot of work

hreyas responds:

hmmmm ,ok will try next time .i would love to see you animate something

[2013: João Maria de Souz]

Comment: wait so he died by a cow falling through the ceiling and squishing him in his sleep then they both die? I'm so lost... who was farting and/or pooping? what was his story? Review: art was good, sound was fine, animation was fine. just wish there was more description

Narwelch responds:

The guy was farting in his sleep. The cow squirted all of it's milk out, and eventually died from not being able to get up. The death I chose was a cow crashed through a man's ceiling, and crushed him in his sleep. That's pretty much it. ( I updated the description)

[Chrysippus]

Interesting, some artwork could improve.

CrazyJackAnims responds:

Thank you for the feedback!
I actually made the characters rough on purpose to finish it quicker, because I only had 3 days to create the whole thing for the jam. I'm glad you liked anyway.

[2014: LT and MS]

wow the elephant was trying to hide the bodies? and people call elephants stupid. Everything works, it would of been 5 stars but the dramatic reenactment looked rushed, and sloppy like you stopped trying.

megadrivesonic responds:

Im still shocked an elephant knew to hide the body, not sure why wasn't like it would have been arrested but maybe the elephant wanted to keep its savana clean. Also the reason that part happened was time was running out and i wanted to make sure it got out on time without any trouble( already had problems when it first uploaded). I wish I had more time to actually tweak that to look better but when time is crunched you work with what you got.

[The Last Seconds]

This video need a little work, first it needs color. Next you didn't show what happened you implied what happened but I couldn't tell that he died. was that supposed to be blood at the end? and the cops reaction kinda sucked, I would expect shock not disgust.

Sanbles responds:

I was trying to keep it funny in the end. I didn't really know how to end it haha. Every other part that looks like it needed work was because of the limited timeframe. It sucked. But thanks for the review!

[Movie Jam 3 Unusual Death]

Comment: You should never rush just to get something out, users would rather see good quality. Quality over quantity my friend. Review: it's informative, the animation is good, the art is good, but it needs sound.

Menmaro responds:

Yeah I know I shouldn't have rushed but I did want to submit something to the movie jam haha. My next work should show some promise. I was going to add in sound but I ran out of time to submit this :/. Thanks for the comment and review!

[2010: Jimi Heselden]

kinda funny

morcov responds:

well