not bad
not bad
Yeah the animation is still a bit jittery in places. I don't know if I should just increase the frame rate, or if I need better software. The one I'm using is the best I've found for the iPad so far though.
ok... everything works, but the animation is a little choppy.
I know, i tried my best but its hard for me.But thanks for comment man,really appreciate it. ;)
what was that about? good art, music's ok, and animation works
it's about a book and a recent movie that has come out.
you just made my favorites list and so has this flash.
OMG! Thank you so much! ^^
I'll try not to disappoint you!
Needs music or voice overs... actually both, the animation was good for the style used (its more tedious than hard but I applaud your patience), no actual artwork.
okey dokey
yep that's how the law works and the audacity to say call me after deserves a broken nose from her.
right? dude makes an ass of himself and still somehow wins. thank you for the review!
The voice track seems a little off but the only thing I haven't seen addressed is that every time they moved or even spoke they kept... well the best word I can use is bouncing, They would bounce every time the spoke a line, move an arm or adjust positions. I suggest studying human behavior and movement or as I like to call it "people watching".
I know exactly what you mean. But I was going so fast that I was just trying to make the tournament deadline without really stepping back and seeing mistakes I was making. That's because I started late; I won't let that happen again.
Comment: God how I've been there... you were spot on with what usually happens lol. Review: The animation was good the music synced great, the only area u need to improve is your artwork and that will come in time and practice.
It's frustrating because I have practiced for a very long time yet I don't feel like I've made any progress whatsoever and in some case it's looks like my drawing ability has actually regressed somewhat. It's coming to a point where I just feel like I don't know what else to do. I guess I just have to keep trying. Thanks for the review.
This is awesome, your style is pretty cool. The only artwork that needs improvement is the castle and sidewalk in the end. I would love to help but im just a writer, a good one, but just a writer. if you need one of those let me know.
thank you for the offer. as busy as I have been could use the help. send me a message and ill send you to our fourm if interested in seeing where we are
The artworks good but it needs more back story or rather more information, like who what when and where, being stated without having to ask the author. If you dont want to edit the movie you can always put it in author comments. It would help a lot.
Ya that would help
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