well its not bad, I've seen worse, the artworks decent (you just need practice more), the music is good, the animation is smooth, the voice overs were a little low at some points making it hard to hear but over all you did a good job
well its not bad, I've seen worse, the artworks decent (you just need practice more), the music is good, the animation is smooth, the voice overs were a little low at some points making it hard to hear but over all you did a good job
really thank you for the review!
that was ok I guess. first off to the kid recording audio, next time do it WITHOUT people talking in the background. if this is your first flash then not bad, but if this isn't... smh
im working on getting a laptop so i can record stuff in my room without the tv on and the chatter in the backround thx
wow...I.... just....wow
well this is kinda lazy animation. The music works, the animation works but the artwork is basic... not much else to say... well I guess "happy birthday Kevin" is in order
the animation was good, you need some voice actors the animatronic computer talk gets old, the music was ok, you had 4 stars going but making Mario look gay with the tentacle up his ass is really getting old so minus 3 stars for unoriginality, there's so much crap on here bashing Mario that its gotten really old. in future flashes be an Individual and take a different path. needs an adult rating instead of mature
#iwasbeingironic #retro #mariosucks
not bad, I like your style.
Thank you :)
needs sound or music other than that nice job
the dialogue sucks, the flash is boring when theyjust stand around and someone is explaining things... its just seems like your trying to force a backstory than anything. the whole story is just kind of sucky, the HUGE thighs are a waste of space, why didn't she react when Rojay was fondling her? Why does a BLACK guy sound like an ARAB? if your still learnig work with some side projects before you try to make a series
yea I understand wanting to be different but the fat thigh thing has to go. Its like mud tires on a Ferrari, yes its uniqe but it don't belong and takes away from the beauty it could be, animation was ok, the music worked, i'd mention getting some voice actors but you already stated that you did this yourself and are looking for some. and like it or not most everyone will rate if it gets seen even if they don't post an animation or only a game creator there not who you need to worry about . you need to worry about your viewers and what they like and dislike so you can improve. that's the whole point.
it was funny, the music fit, work on your art and animation
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