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It wont let me rate anywhere but in reviews. Just wanted to rate it 5 stars. nicely done

TheUnseriousguy responds:

thats because this isnt in the art portal since its just a sketch, and thanks ;D

Her eyes... i'm captivated by her eyes.... so much beauty... so much soul...

VerdRage responds:

So finaly I can perform portraits then. So much win. ;)

nice but one question... where's her mouth?

Kel-chan responds:

its there but the shading is a big wonky- it happens because there is no edgeline on the mouth- atleast not from this particular angle because of the way it is calculated. If i rotate the camera a lil then it would show. Also the JPEG is compressed which means the pixels get smooshed together- If I uploaded the bitmap at 1920 you'd like the line

needs color and whats up with all the black dots?

Argon098 responds:

yeah haha at the time my teacher wanted us to use it for shading purposes. Ultra Fine sharpie hence the reason it took so long ha

Its nice, but to be honest it looks like a boy in a skirt having the hair so short. The skirt seems to be the only gender definer there... maybe its just me.

Kel-chan responds:

i made her more feminine in the first version- with longer hair and more busty but it just rubbed me kind of wrong. Her personality is deadpan and emotionless and she's pretty much flatchested and androgynous.

Since its an ensemble thing I'll leave the sexy and feminine to a character that has a matching archetype/personality

Do you publish this stuff as graphic novels? If not you should because you are extremely talented and could go far in that industry.

Kel-chan responds:

the full comic so far is here: http://www.inkblazers.com/manga-and-comics/Aries-Sky/detail-page/7194?lang=en

this is really just a side project- i'm trying to learn how to 3d animate

Looks awesome, one question though, is the character suppose to look zombified or like in a trance?

NeppyNeptune responds:

yup!! it's one of his forms!! glad you like it!

This looks identical to an anime that was on adult swim at one point called " Ghost in the shell" the only difference is a skimpier thong and a more lingerie style type outfit. the main chick was an android, The guy on the right is blind but has bionic eyes, and the guy on the left was plain human. nice job making her bustier and on giving her a bigger curvier butt.

Dakzky responds:

actually "GITS" stands for (G)host (I)n (T)he (S)hell . this one comissioned by a GITS fan . glad you liked my version of it hehe

she needs less dull colors, she's got a nice body but the color scheme is a turn off... I mean the dress is ok but the hair and shoe color gives me a kind of "meh nothing special", with brown being the main color on the character the other colors should for lack of a better word "pop" even as a cook that body type needs some style bro but that's just me. either way yyour work is still awesome

Dakzky responds:

i wanted to come up with a normal looking character because of her background story . tweetums and nerdy so to speak . i also want to make a character simple to animate so i wont stress my self too much for the project . and besides ,these characters are to be uniquely different from each other . anyway tnx for the review :D

other than her skin blending in with her outfit (mainly the top blending in with the breasts) this is awesome. If you decide to edit it may I suggest ether change her skin tone a bit or since she's a healer make her top a light blue or green the both work with white. I'm not sure what the small rectangles and squares are (I assume there pieces of metal or something) if the color is an issue use complimentary colors (blue/orange, green/red and so on) to make her less bland. once again that's just my personal opinion. you get 5 stars either way because your work is awesome.

Dakzky responds:

the rectangles are clips . i will try to experiment on the colors . tnx for your suggestion :D

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